tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post46525495273266735..comments2023-06-25T11:02:00.806-05:00Comments on The Lazy, Yet Discerning Ficster: Smut 101: Choose Your Words Carefully.Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-23886118114553080522010-01-03T16:12:07.568-06:002010-01-03T16:12:07.568-06:00I know this was posted a long time ago but my frie...I know this was posted a long time ago but my friends and I have another name for female oral sex that I find kind of funny and others might want to use. We call it "chewing on the bubble gum", after Rasheeda's song "Got that Good". Listen to it and you'll get it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-55012287106909824622009-06-15T19:49:15.398-05:002009-06-15T19:49:15.398-05:00Thanks y'all. I laughed but also took some se...Thanks y'all. I laughed but also took some serious notes! Thanks for the information! This is really going to help me think twice before using certain words. I know there are some that get to me and "bundle of nerves" is right up there. Isn't your brain a bundle of nerves?Jewels64https://www.blogger.com/profile/01103456165370093904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-30583065356013443322009-06-13T16:36:19.575-05:002009-06-13T16:36:19.575-05:00Oh, thank you! 'Core', 'folds' and...Oh, thank you! 'Core', 'folds' and 'bundle of nerves' definitely make me grit my teeth the worst. Folds, Jesus.<br /><br />'Apex' bothers me too...Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08988685736635515808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-7518438281553516902009-06-13T12:00:16.113-05:002009-06-13T12:00:16.113-05:00this was hilarious, and so right on. (i agree, ...this was hilarious, and so right on. (i agree, 'riding the baloney pony' is just...hilarious. ew.) and where, for the love of all things holy, did you find that pic/manip of edward-between-thighs?! haha!! *that* had me almost fallin out of my chair.<br />generally most of these terms (especially core, mounds, etc -- "folds" really bugs me too, frankly) just come off as super cheesy to me. they distract me when i'm reading. i like what gustariana said about conveying (emotional) feeling....not just physical.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05379697190310944147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-24271819781575780502009-06-13T10:45:39.872-05:002009-06-13T10:45:39.872-05:00great article, very informative.great article, very informative.Joanne110https://www.blogger.com/profile/04175560184957149639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-13012836721290683882009-06-12T13:30:16.528-05:002009-06-12T13:30:16.528-05:00I am dying here. I giggled through that whole thin...I am dying here. I giggled through that whole thing. You are awesome. I agree with your advice completely. I hope the authors that read this learn something from it. <br /><br />And that pic of Rob....bwahahaha. <br /><br />xxooAnniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11071126999725027558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-6618982453934106682009-06-11T19:35:12.621-05:002009-06-11T19:35:12.621-05:00OMG! You don't know how many times I've pu...OMG! You don't know how many times I've put out a plea for a "Sex"thaurus. Thanks for putting this together.<br /><br />I have to admit that in the beginning I've fallen into the trap of several of those words. However, you live and learn as you write.<br /><br />I TOTES agree with you on your characters and keeping them in character during lovemaking/sex. I have been turned off so many times by a sweet story that has the two f*cking like rabid beasts. I agree with Gust that everyone F*cks sometimes but keep it in character!<br /><br />Now to go copy that list for future use!<br /><br />ObsessingOverEdwardAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2291157166360423354.post-2263039584723758582009-06-11T07:57:28.007-05:002009-06-11T07:57:28.007-05:00Oh my god! LOL- riding the baloney pony?? I almost...Oh my god! LOL- riding the baloney pony?? I almost fell out of my chair.<br /><br />Great article on a subject many authors are squeamish about and many fans want to see! <br /><br />I'm in the midst of a first time lemon so this is great timing for me. Wonderful article!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com